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Stalking 5.0 Star Reviews (Honestly)

We wrote The Leopard Tree in 2007 and won two awards with it in 2008, but it languished with poor sales for the next five years. We both had demanding jobs with little spare time for promotion, so we took the “message in a bottle” approach to promotion. Throw it out there for sale on Amazon and wait for the flood of buyers. Unfortunately, that approach simply does not work. Whether your book represents the Great American Novel or just a weekend project, you still have to promote it to get it into the hands of readers. Getting great reviews early on in the process will help. Here are a few tips:

  1. Get draft reviews before you self-publish your book. Share it with friends who will give you an honest opinion – then LISTEN. When they tell you it didn’t hold their attention or had vague characters, figure out how to make it better and go back to work. Only put out your very best work.
  2. Hire a professional book doctor or editor who will be brutally honest in telling you what’s right and wrong with your book. LISTEN. Make changes and pass the book around again until both friends and professional editors tell you it is good. Not everyone will agree on every detail, but listening to comments and acting on those that make sense will only make you a better writer.
  3. Enter contests – We won $1000 for The Leopard Tree when it won Best Young Adult Novel in 2008 in the Writer’s Digest Self-published contest. Some contests include a professional review as part of the award. Ours earned a Midwest Book Review. Also, you can pull excerpts out of the judge’s comments, which will be very useful in promotions.
  4. Give a free copy of your book to friends and acquaintances who express a bit of interest and ask them to read it and review it. Do not tell them to “review it if you like it.” Ask for honest feedback. If you don’t have the confidence to do this, your book may not be ready for publication and it likely will not sell.
  5. Remind people who tell you they have read your book to post a review on Amazon. Some will immediately agree and some will not be comfortable doing that. If they say they will, REMIND. People get busy, and may forget to get this done without the gentle reminders.
  6. Ask other authors who write in your genre to review your book and offer to review their book in return. Local publishing associations are a great place to find people who are willing to participate in a reciprocal reading/review strategy. You each have an opportunity to learn more about each other, writing and reviewing.
  7. Read every review that goes up, and don’t forget to thank reviewers publicly in your Blog and on your book’s Facebook page.
  8. Encourage people to post a recommendation for the book or a few words from their review on their own Facebook and Twitter pages.

The Leopard Tree only had half a dozen reviews after five years on Amazon until we got serious about promoting it. It went from 10 5.0 Star reviews in May of this year to 38  5.0 Star Reviews this past week. Twenty-five thousand readers who downloaded it for FREE are now leaving unsolicited comments on Amazon and Facebook. Thankfully, their comments have been very supportive and positive and sales are growing..

We had 11 – 5.0 Star Reviews on our non-fiction book, Put the HEART Back In Your Community, in less than a year and went from one review to eleven in less than two months. We could have done better but simply did not work at it. Now we know we have to work at it and are learning how to do that more effectively. It is a niche market book about community planning so we were not disappointed with 1,400 downloads during three free days.

As an author, if you are involved in the Kindle Direct Publishing Select program with Amazon, you get five days every 90 days to promote your book by allowing a free download. By getting it in more readers’ hands, even though they haven’t paid for the pleasure, you are creating opportunities to get more reviews.

Reviews certainly help you sell your book, but they also energize you as a writer. When you begin getting reviews from people you don’t know and may never meet, and they clearly understand what you attempted to get across, there is no better reward. At their worst, reviews provide needed feedback. But at their best, they are rocket fuel.

– Tim Merriman and Lisa Brochu

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A Girl of the Limberlost, Memories of My Mother

The Wonderful Wizard of OzMy mother’s maiden name was Rosa Carson. She was born on a very small farm in rural central Illinois in 1908. She loved school. She longed for as much education as possible. Her parents’ farm was six miles from Vandalia, where the high school was located in the early 1920s. She finished the one-room country grade school at age twelve. Then she drove a horse-drawn buggy down a rutted dirt road with her younger brother the six miles each morning and home each evening in all weather for four years of high school. She graduated second in the county at age sixteen, but was not sent to college. Her brothers were encouraged to go further, but as a girl, higher education was deemed unimportant, despite her many talents.

I was born just after her 37th birthday, the last of four children and fifteen years younger than my next older sister. Mom encouraged me to read early. I still remember when I was 12 years old sitting in our living room on Eighth Street with a huge copy of The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. I remember the moment I finished the book. I didn’t want it to end. It was one of the first times I realized the power of a story to transport a person to another time and place.

When I was in college I read voraciously, often to the detriment of my grades. I enjoyed novels much more than textbooks. I would go back to my boyhood home for a weekend and ask mom if she had heard of the novel I was reading. Nine out of ten times she would say, “Yes, I’ve read that” or “I’m reading it now.” She belonged to several contemporary book clubs and stayed abreast of new literature being published. Did I mention she worked fifty hours a week in her florist business, took care of our home, and did the bookkeeping for my father’s business?

A Girl of the LimberlostAlong with reading, I grew up with a passion for nature and animals. I came by it honestly. My mother adopted every stray cat that dropped by and watched any TV show on animals that came along. Long after completing B.S. and M.A. degrees in biology I asked what propelled her interest in nature. A Girl of the Limberlost, a novel, she would say. Gene Stratton-Porter was an Indiana author who wrote a series of books about a young girl infatuated with the Limberlost, a virgin forest teeming with big trees and wildlife. I remembered the name but never bothered to read the books.

When my children’s plays were published in primary children’s readers, Mom shared her poetry and short stories with me. They were wonderful. I had no idea that she had aspirations of being a writer. She shared complaints and frustrations very sparingly. She looked always at the good side of people and the opportunities, choosing not to dwell on what did not happen as she wished.


Just a few months ago I searched Amazon for Girl of the Limberlost and found it easily. I started reading it and was once again transported to a place I wanted to stay. Reading the Limberlost book I understood her connection to the girl in the story. They shared a love for nature and the challenge of being denied a career and education she craved. My mother passed away more than twenty years ago. I regret now that I waited so long to read the book that meant so much to her because it helped me know her in a way I never had before.  I’ve realized many times that she was happy with her business and family life but she was also very pleased that I had chased a career she might have enjoyed.

The Leopard TreeWhen Lisa Brochu, my wife, and I published our first novel in 2007, The Leopard Tree, the main character we created was a strong, intelligent woman who traveled the world as a photojournalist. We both had talented, hardworking mothers who might have had more exciting professional careers but their priorities were to raise a family, volunteer at church, and inspire us. We gave the main character in The Leopard Tree a familiar name, my mother’s, Rosa Carson.

-Tim Merriman

P.S. This is the first blog of what will be a weekly series about reading and writing books. If you read avidly or aspire to write, we hope you find inspiration and enjoyment here. Lisa Brochu, my wife and best friend, and I share a passion for story telling and the craftsmanship of writing. We hope you tune in and comment when the spirit moves you.


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